May
25

Good news for marketers… or is it news?

NEWS FLASH: Long copy ads make a comeback.

Or did they actually go anywhere?

One of the longest standing debates online is whether long copy or short copy works better.

Short copy advocates say “no one will read all that text”.

Long copy advocates say “without the text they have nothing to base a decision on”.

As you probably know by now, I am a BIG believer in long copy ads.

So when I saw this article by Marketing Forecast, it wasn’t a big surprise to me.

The summary – short copy ads are increasing prevalent on the net, and increasing difficult to stand out from the crowd with.

Reaaaaally?

Who’d have thunk it?

Imagine that…

…someone interested in weight loss goes online and sees one page with some pretty pictures of people who lost weight – and an order button.

The next page they go to shows the pictures, and actually tells the story about how Joe was 84 pounds overweight, had poor health, his children were worried about him, his boss gave him an ultimatum about dressing properly to be in front of clients, and his wife stopped having sex with him a year ago.

Eureka!

He finds a simple solution… and follows it to the T.

It shows his journal entries… and his weight loss records. Then it explains what his life is like now being 75 pounds lighter, happy kids he can play with, his wife is constantly dragging him back to the bedroom, and his boss gave him a raise thanks to his increased confidence and sales numbers.

What do you think…

…pretty pictures

…or an actual story explaining the pictures

Which will make more money?

Not too hard to figure out.

If the long copy ad is targeted at people who are overweight and experiecing problems liuke Joe was, the long copy ad will SMOKE the short copy ad.

It. Just. Makes. Sense.

But it is news on the internet.

For some reason.

The point is… long copy is (almost) always easier to tell a story with.

Picture ads look nice, but are MUCH more costly to try and get the sales numbers.

And the small business owners and entrepreneurs I work with are wayyyyyy more concerned about their bank account and ability to feed their family, than the beautiful branding campaign that cost them a second mortgage and brought them nothing in bankable revenues.

I LOVE working with entrepreneurs.

Their passion is contagious.

Their drive is irreplacable.

Their ability to see and do things mere mortals can’t is admirable.

And their entrepreneurial spirit is what drives economies back from the brink.

I never left long copy – and if you did – now is the time to get back!

Let me know your thoughts on the long copy vs short debate.

Troy

Jan
21

2-Stepping Your Way to Successful Lead Generation

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Jan
17

5 Steps to Sticky Lead Generation

Are you trying to do too much with your advertising?  Lots of people I talk to want to take over the world with their new sales letter.   To them, it is perfectly logical to have a letter that finds prospective buyers, lets them to trust you, gives them every reason they need for buying, and gets them to pull out their credit card right now for this product, and for all future products they offer.

Yeah… sure. And I have a magic website that takes 4 minutes a month to run, and makes $14 billion a year in pure profits.  Not only that, it can be yours for just $997!

When you are putting together your marketing campaigns and sales letters… you need to do one thing at a time.

The first thing you need to do is FIND THE RIGHT PEOPLE to sell to.  People that already have a problem that needs fixing… or some unspoken desire they want fulfilled.  You do not want to take some complete stranger and try to convince them your widget is perfect for them.

There must be something they will lose by not having your solution to their problem or desire.  They might lose status, money, time, an easier way of doing things, or the exclusivity of owning what you are selling.

Whatever it is that they will lose, you need to know it, and you need to address it in your copy.

Another thing you need to understand is who the 20% are in your target market.  You can write an advertisement that tries to sell to everyone… but why would you? Doesn’t it make more sense to go after the 20% of the market that will earn you 80% of your revenues and profits? Call out specifically to them in your
headline and offer, and you will quickly find your sales growing and your list of HIGHLY qualified buyers growing.

I highly recommend you use 2 step advertising, which means the first step in your sales campaigns is in the lead generation ads you run.  Offer them something for free (of course, it must be 100% in sync with what you ultimately want to sell them).  All they should have to do to claim your freebies is to visit a website or drop you a phone call and leave you their contact information. The follow up sales piece they see after getting your free offer is the sales letter to sell them on the actual product or service you want to sell them.  If you go straight for the sale… you will sell much less and have a much smaller database to follow up with.

Here is an advertisement I ran for 2 years untouched in a Canadian business paper.  Every time it ran (every 2 weeks), it generated me 50 high quality leads.  And those leads turned out to be my best customers as far as money spent, and quantity of products bought.

They filled out the form at the old URL I used, they received the package promise in the mail, and then I followed up with promotions over the following months and years.

And I HIGHLY recommend you use a formula just like this in your business.

Know exactly who you are selling to, design a lead generating ad just like this one that targets them, and follow up with the freebies and the promotional pieces selling your products and services.

It is a model that WILL work for you, as it does for me.

Note a few things about this lead generation advertisement: -  It uses a headline that calls out to business owners (I could have tested a more specific headline too that focused on an exact type of business as well – but my experience with business edge, the paperr I used for this ad showed a great quality lead as this ad was.  I did test numerous headlines, numerous offers, and a few different website domains.  Ultimately I found the perfect combination that got me the most leads… and it ran untouched for 2 years.

-  I mention right in the subhead that it is FREE… so they understand what I am asking of them will not cost them.  Plus, FREE is still one of the most powerful words in advertising (even better in a recession).

-   Specifics about what they get.  Include the names of what they will receive, and specifics of what it will teach them. Specifics sell!

-   I gave them a couple options – website or phone call.  I found that 20% of the respondants would phone, the rest would fill out the form on the site used (the site in this ad no longer offers the form, I just used it as an example).

-  Last (and MOST important)… I told them WHY I was doing this.

Just because it is free, doesn’t mean they will take action.

They needed to understand my motives behind this… so I told them.

Try this approach… it will work wonders for your lead generation and sales campaigns.  Let me know how it works for you!

Troy

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Apr
25

Retail marketing at it’s finest

To me, anyone selling products or services through a website owns a retail store.  The buyers come in, they browse, and they walk out… with or without buying.

First, you need to get them IN to the store.

Then you need to make it easy for them to browse and find what they are looking for (or guide them down the ‘aisles’ you want them to shop from.

The best part about the internet retail stores?

You can use your words to compel them to buy.

Most retail stores offline use inexperienced sales people.  With your website, and a little training on how to sell via the written word, you can master the art and science of convincing qualified people to buy what you sell.

Once you have a master “sales script” written for your website, you can pile in the people and have your words do all the selling for you.

Here is the PERFECT example of an offline retail store leveraging the power of words… and the blockbuster sales they got as a result.

Do 500 men love their wives?

In 1934 a florist (B. Altman @ Company) ran an advertisement that went like this:

“We believe there are 500 men in New York who love their wives… and want to give them flowers for    Easter

So… we’ve provided 500 old-fashioned bouquets… ready now and packed in beautiful boxes. They’re    just inside the Fifth Avenue entrance… all at one price and that one price very easily to afford” ($2.50)

Simple?

Yes.

Successful?

500 bouquets sold in 3 hours = 170 PER HOUR!

So, yes.

The reason why this is mentioned here?

Could YOU not find a way to make this work?

You are appealing to an upcoming holiday — one typically not thought of by men that often as a reason to give flowers. [hint: Thanksgiving AND Halloween are both great reasons for a promotion]

You are appealing to the simple nature of men… make is EASY to buy (packaging done – right inside the door – one price – not expensive… all of these make it EASY to buy).

How could you run a special bundle promotion for Halloween or thanksgiving?

Not hard to figure out is it?

“Thanks for being a great customer – - here is a special  offer just for you.  Offer good until midnight on
Thanksgiving day.”

Think it through – and get your promotions going!

(PS: The ad above was written by Ruth Packard – one of histories greatest copywriters who understood the power of simplicity and ease of order).